ashavah: ([Hobbies] Elissa)
JK Ashavah ([personal profile] ashavah) wrote in [community profile] ineedmyfics 2010-09-13 02:13 pm (UTC)

This is breathtakingly gorgeous. Every line is rich with detail, deeply steeped in the daily life of Ferelden and all the tasks and challenges that Kallian faces. I love how you've captured not only a series of beautiful little scenes from their travels across Ferelden, but the conflict between Kallian faces as the young, damaged, uncertain product of the alienage who's yet required to take the mantle of the order of the Grey Wardens and try to regain something of her pride and dignity, and not to let others see her doubts, in order to save all of Ferelden.

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