I know as your beta I already got to read this, but all my comments still stand: this is criminally beautiful. Each snippet is so in-character that it hurts, because these are all hurtful small segments of larger stories, and each snippet is such a great look inside the thoughts of these characters. I'm a sucker for them all but particularly for the way you chose to end it, on Laura's note. Every time I read this I feel like I got dipped in BSG all over again, and the individual pieces of this story linger. They stick with me and I find myself thinking about them at odd random moments.

All of that bears repeating here. This story is masterfully done.