ext_71355 ([identity profile] in-the-blue.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ineedmyfics 2011-09-20 02:59 am (UTC)

Ha, this made me smile. I love the distinct voices you have for the three of them, and it doesn't matter that this continuity doesn't exist per se in canon. It still work, and it works beautifully. I could picture the three of them sitting there, and I love the separate diary entries delineating the unspoken thoughts. Really nicely done!
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