Percy was never a favorite character of mine. I know a lot of people were relieved that he had a shot at redemption and really, he did help himself dramatically by showing up and taking place at the final battle. This is really bittersweet, watching him relive some moments and live others for the first time. I'm glad you have him going from pure priggish bureaucrat to someone with a little more of a heart.

I love Luna's voice in this. I love her "there's the glitch, then" -- that stands out to me because of course she'd know there would be a glitch, like it or not, and thankfully in this story it wasn't a drastic glitch. And I love that Percy was relieved to get away from his desk job for once!